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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children… · Band 2.5

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Band 2.5

Prompt: These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

First of all,that is really true.Nowadays a lot of fathers stay at home with their children and take care of their children while his wife go out to work.I think that it is not normal for people.Because children need mother's care.And people have questions like these: why women have to go out to work or why men relax in house with his children instead earn money?I think than men have to earn money instead women.Women have to give attention her children and husband.She has to cooking and clean her own house instead working.And another question: what could be the reasons for this?This is absolutly right question for this situation.Suddenly I think about this and these days girls want to career instead marry.But a lot of parents say "No" for their opinion and marry her daughter.Byt she wants career after marry and she go out to work.And father have to take care children.But mother's should give attention their husband and children instead working

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