These days, if people have health problems, many do not visit doctors.… · Band 5
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Prompt: These days, if people have health problems, many do not visit doctors. They try to get better at home by themselves. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, when people do not feel themselves well they try to trait themselves rather than going to hospital.Although this trend brings some benefits, I believe it is mainly a negative development.
To begin with, one of the main disadvantages of curing illness by yourself is that there high risk that you drink incorrect treatments or catch an infection. this means that you can gain more serious health issues.As a result by treating yourself people can't get over the illness moreover people can gain more serious health problems. Scientists said that there were a lot of situation where patients traits themselves by their methods and this leads to more serious problems. Another important drawback is that some people when they are buying a medicine don't know a side effects such as little head ache or insomnia. In the other words when they are at work or they are driving this affects can effect on wrong time and if the person was in car this can lead to car crash.
However, this trend also has positive aspects. One significant benefit is that the prices for doctor’s consultation is too high and the medicines can be not easy to find or expensive too. This can lead to that people who can't afford a consultation would learn by watching "YOUTUBE" or asking AI. To illustrate, rather than going to the hospital and paying to them, Ai can give you advice or medicine if it is just small health issue. Additionally, it saves a lot of time and it can be seen as a advantages because if someone live miles from anywhere there a one hospital to one village and they can be filled with people who are ill, there are number of people that love far from civilization and most of them they have a traditional methods of defeating an illness and with high chance they are really healthy. Scientists said that for decades or for centuries when people had a profession as a doctor but rather than cure people with peels they used a special herbs and roots and if this methods didn't work, we wouldn't know about it or these people would be died by illness.
In conclusion, although self-medicate has some advantages, I strongly believe that its drawbacks are more significant. Therefore, this trend should be considered mainly a negative development.