IELTS General Training xat: poyezdda yoʻqolgan sumka — Band 7 va 8

Topshiriq

You took a train last week and left a bag on it. Write a letter to the railway company's lost property office. In your letter: describe the journey you made; say what your bag looks like and what was inside it; explain what you would like the company to do.

Bu General Training Task 1, yaʼni rasmiy (formal) xat. Uchta band bor va ularning hammasiga javob berish shart: sayohat tavsifi, sumka va ichidagi narsalar, kompaniyadan nima talab qilasiz. Xat kamida 150 soʻz boʻlishi kerak. Ohang rasmiy, shuning uchun "Dear Sir or Madam" bilan boshlab, "Yours faithfully" bilan yakunlanadi (ism nomaʼlum boʻlsa).

Nega 7 ball, 8 emas

Bu mavzuda quyi namuna 7 ball oladi. Xat tuzilgan, uchala band yoritilgan. Biroq 8 ga yetmaydi, chunki detallar yetarlicha aniq emas va bir nechta grammatik xato bor.

• Grammatik xato. "a brown wallet which containing my bank cards" — notoʻgʻri. Toʻgʻrisi: "a brown wallet containing my bank cards" yoki "which contained". Bunday xatolar band 8 ni pasaytiradi.
• Soʻz tanlovi umumiy. "several important items", "some personal documents that are very important for me" — ikki marta "important". Band 8 namunada konkret: "a silver MacBook Pro", "a navy passport holder with my passport and travel documents".
• Sumka tavsifi kam. "medium size black leather bag with a silver zip" yaxshi, ammo ajralib turuvchi belgi yoʻq. Band 8 da: "a broken zip on the front pocket and a distinctive red luggage tag bearing my initials". Bunday detal sumkani topishda haqiqatan yordam beradi, examiner ham buni baholaydi.
• Joyni aytmagan. Qayerda qolganini yozmagan, "I believe I left my bag on the overhead luggage rack" kabi jumla xatni ishonchli qiladi.
• Sustroq ohang. "I am also happy to collect the bag from your office personally if it is necessary" — "if it is necessary" ortiqcha. "I would be happy to collect it in person" oddiyroq va tabiiyroq.

Nima uchun ikkinchi xatga 8 berilgan

• Maqsad birinchi jumlada: "I am writing to report a bag that I inadvertently left on one of your trains last week and to request your assistance in recovering it." "report" va "request" feʼllari ikkala vazifani ham aytadi.
• Aniq va sodda detallar: "arriving at approximately 13:00", "Coach D, seat number 34".
• Rasmiy soʻzlar tabiiy: "disembarked", "unclaimed items", "at your earliest convenience" — ular xatning uslubiga mos tushgan.
• Iltimos yumshoq, lekin aniq: "I would be most grateful if your staff could search the train and any storage facilities where unclaimed items are held." Talab qilmayapti, hurmat bilan soʻrayapti.
• Yakuniy harakat: "so that I may arrange collection" — keyingi qadam aniq.

Oʻzbek tilida soʻzlovchilar uchun xatolar

• ✗ I left my bag in the train. → ✓ I left my bag on the train. Transport vositasi bilan "on" ishlatiladi (on the train, on the bus). Oʻzbekchada "poyezdda" bitta qoʻshimcha, shuning uchun "in" tanlanadi.
• ✗ I travelled from Tashkent to Samarkand at Tuesday. → ✓ …on Tuesday. Kun bilan "on", vaqt bilan "at".
• ✗ The bag has a black colour. → ✓ The bag is black. "-rangli" tarjimasidan "has a ... colour" paydo boʻladi, inglizcha tabiiy emas.
• ✗ Please inform me when you will find it. → ✓ Please inform me as soon as you find it. "when/as soon as" dan keyin kelasi zamon ishlatilmaydi, oʻzbekchada esa "topsangiz / topganingizda" kelasi zamonga yaqin tuyuladi.
• ✗ I am waiting for your quick answer. → ✓ I look forward to hearing from you. Rasmiy xat yakunida standart ibora ishlating; "I am waiting for your answer" ohang jihatidan qoʻpol.
• ✗ Inside there were my documents, laptop and the wallet. → ✓ Inside the bag were my documents, my laptop and my wallet. Roʻyxatda artikl yoki egalik olmoshi har bir ot oldida boʻlishi kerak, aks holda ritm buziladi.

Foydali iboralar

• I am writing to report… — … haqida xabar berish uchun yozyapman
• to leave something behind — biror narsani unutib qoldirish
• the lost property office — yoʻqolgan buyumlar boʻlimi
• to disembark / to get off the train — poyezddan tushish
• the overhead luggage rack — tepadagi yuk tokchasi
• a distinctive luggage tag — ajralib turuvchi yuk yorligʻi
• to be seated in coach D — D vagonda oʻtirgan boʻlish
• I would be most grateful if… — agar … boʻlsa, juda minnatdor boʻlardim
• at your earliest convenience — imkon boricha tezroq
• to arrange collection — olib ketishni kelishish
• unclaimed items — egasi topilmagan buyumlar
• to contact me on the number below — pastdagi raqam orqali bogʻlanish

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