In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing… · Band 2
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Band 2.0
Prompt: In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems, and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In many countries, the average weight of people is raising and their levels of health and fitness are dropping. How do you think are the causes of these problems , and what measures could be taken to solve them ? In my opinion in most of countries have a big problem . Because there are a lot of fat people in their counry. And automatically increases demand for hospital. This means that for building new hhospitas the contry need big budget but, this situation also will be usefull for budget of country. Because there will be new jobs for graduators of the country. In addition there will be new gyms and fitness clubs. It gets jobs for coaches .